Me. Her. Him
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Comment from Daylily
Did you forget to put a violence warning on this? It is pretty graphic.
It is a well-written and fast paced story that leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen next. That is always a good thing.
There might be something missing from this line:
'Michelle, what are you?'
(maybe, what are you doing--or something?)
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Did you forget to put a violence warning on this? It is pretty graphic.
It is a well-written and fast paced story that leaves the reader wondering what is going to happen next. That is always a good thing.
There might be something missing from this line:
'Michelle, what are you?'
(maybe, what are you doing--or something?)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from karenina
Michelle is a piece of work! She needs some serious psychotherapy. Even if she was doing this out of "love' for Angela, she's well over the top! So--we KNOW William isn't dead. This we know Michelle didn't kill him...(maybe she thought she did?)--
I've got a sneaky suspicion she's known he was hanging around since that night and Lord knows how manipulative things may have happened between them as she "guarded" Rebecca from knowing her paternity.
Which begs the question...just what has Paul known and how long has he known it?
This is a great write. I've enjoyed every plot twist. I have a feeling there are one or two more to come!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Michelle is a piece of work! She needs some serious psychotherapy. Even if she was doing this out of "love' for Angela, she's well over the top! So--we KNOW William isn't dead. This we know Michelle didn't kill him...(maybe she thought she did?)--
I've got a sneaky suspicion she's known he was hanging around since that night and Lord knows how manipulative things may have happened between them as she "guarded" Rebecca from knowing her paternity.
Which begs the question...just what has Paul known and how long has he known it?
This is a great write. I've enjoyed every plot twist. I have a feeling there are one or two more to come!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Smile.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You've got a real sense here of creepiness and very dark thoughts going on, especially in Michelle's head. And I wonder now if Angela is in any condition to drive home. Small edit: All I know (no need for an additional 'is') is that William overpowered her. An excellent story that just goes on getting darker! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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You've got a real sense here of creepiness and very dark thoughts going on, especially in Michelle's head. And I wonder now if Angela is in any condition to drive home. Small edit: All I know (no need for an additional 'is') is that William overpowered her. An excellent story that just goes on getting darker! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, this is a good write, but I can't wait to find out exactly what Angela does. Many of the answers we now have, but still wondering about this situation. Is Michelle going to kill him? She almost has to keep things silent, but should they remain hidden?? This is a good write.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Okay, this is a good write, but I can't wait to find out exactly what Angela does. Many of the answers we now have, but still wondering about this situation. Is Michelle going to kill him? She almost has to keep things silent, but should they remain hidden?? This is a good write.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara, there's still a couple more chapters to come.
Comment from BethShelby
I think she had better be afraid of Michelle. She is apprarently a cold hearted killer and if William isn't dead already he soon will be. I'm surprised Michelle hasn't conspired to kill Paul. Angela shouldn't allow this to go further even she has to suffer the conquences herself. I'm anxious to see where you are taking this.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I think she had better be afraid of Michelle. She is apprarently a cold hearted killer and if William isn't dead already he soon will be. I'm surprised Michelle hasn't conspired to kill Paul. Angela shouldn't allow this to go further even she has to suffer the conquences herself. I'm anxious to see where you are taking this.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not quite sure what has happened to William as I have missed a few posts and your notes at the top does not cover what has happened preciously. It sounds like William is unconscious, although he cannot be dead, that is unless he has a twin brother! Another fine post Jacob, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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I'm not quite sure what has happened to William as I have missed a few posts and your notes at the top does not cover what has happened preciously. It sounds like William is unconscious, although he cannot be dead, that is unless he has a twin brother! Another fine post Jacob, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023
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Thank you Dolly.