Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellent and fascinating, enigmatic writing as always, Ricky. As usual I love the word play and the structure of this. Playing with the 'eye' and using snatches of other writing - just great.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thanks and much Appreciated.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Again, thank you for sharing.
 
As the Snoe it's lightly falling (Snow??? unless one of your spellings.)

The snowflakes drifting now overhead
and God? (needs a comma after 'overhead)

Dear Lord God fore goodness sake? (comma after 'God' and 'for)

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2023

Thanks for the Snow!
Doctor Ricky