Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 70"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
7 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh, my God, now we're getting into dead people and crying babies. This cannot be good! That was a very engaging chapter I must say there's only one thing It can be done about such a good chapter. I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great christmas And a happy new year or too!
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Oh, my God, now we're getting into dead people and crying babies. This cannot be good! That was a very engaging chapter I must say there's only one thing It can be done about such a good chapter. I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great christmas And a happy new year or too!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea and for the six stars as well.
Comment from karenina
Wow. Accident? Maybe... Not premeditated!
What the heck is the always logical Michelle thinking?
Dump a body? Steal a baby?
The train has derailed!
I'm bracing for the crash!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Wow. Accident? Maybe... Not premeditated!
What the heck is the always logical Michelle thinking?
Dump a body? Steal a baby?
The train has derailed!
I'm bracing for the crash!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome!
Comment from Navada
Ooh - I did not see this coming. What a dramatic development! Things will definitely spiral from this point. I foresee a police investigation and a lot of things coming out as a consequence.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Ooh - I did not see this coming. What a dramatic development! Things will definitely spiral from this point. I foresee a police investigation and a lot of things coming out as a consequence.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh dear! I think I might have been holding my breath there. Something was obviously going to happen but I wouldn't have predicted that. It's a bit of a leap though, not to report it to the authorities and I know Michelle is pragmatic but that is still quite unexpected. But there again, there had to be something very shocking that they were concealing from William. It's all action now, Jacob, after the more gentle previous chapters. But great drama! No errors noted. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Oh dear! I think I might have been holding my breath there. Something was obviously going to happen but I wouldn't have predicted that. It's a bit of a leap though, not to report it to the authorities and I know Michelle is pragmatic but that is still quite unexpected. But there again, there had to be something very shocking that they were concealing from William. It's all action now, Jacob, after the more gentle previous chapters. But great drama! No errors noted. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Well, now I know what happened to Caz and how Angela ended up with Rebecca. It was an accident. We just need to know how William fits back into the picture. I do understand why Angela is so upset about what happened in the past. This is a good story.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Well, now I know what happened to Caz and how Angela ended up with Rebecca. It was an accident. We just need to know how William fits back into the picture. I do understand why Angela is so upset about what happened in the past. This is a good story.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Gunner Lil
A well written chapter that has good conflict and a possible
solution.
Excellent dialogue that moves the tale along with a nice flow and pace.
Call the paramedics before the body gets cold.
Thank you!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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A well written chapter that has good conflict and a possible
solution.
Excellent dialogue that moves the tale along with a nice flow and pace.
Call the paramedics before the body gets cold.
Thank you!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
I can see how that story would be viewed as suspicious, Angela grabbing her shoulder much have caused the fall. Still the idea of disposing of her body would certainly incriminate them and claiming the baby was Angela's is a wild idea. For Michelle to come up with a plan like that so suddenly is weird. Michelle does always as normal. This answers a lot of questions.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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I can see how that story would be viewed as suspicious, Angela grabbing her shoulder much have caused the fall. Still the idea of disposing of her body would certainly incriminate them and claiming the baby was Angela's is a wild idea. For Michelle to come up with a plan like that so suddenly is weird. Michelle does always as normal. This answers a lot of questions.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.