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Me. Her. Him

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A hidden past, a devastating truth.

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Comment from Lea Tonin1
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Do they actually have boarding school anymore? God bless all those people who go out. Most of their lives to save others I must say. Another great chapter a wonderful addition to your book. A great submission I hope you have an awesome night!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
    Thank you Lea. Yes boarding school is still quite common in the UK, I actually went to boarding school when I was a teenager. It was pretty much just like Hogwarts if you?ve read Harry Potter, only without the magic.
reply by Lea Tonin1 on 22-Dec-2023
    Oh wow cool!
Comment from Navada
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This is fast becoming a very tense situation. I can see it from both perspectives. Caz is obviously desperate and distressed, but it's hard to carry someone financially when there are no family ties to justify it.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from karenina
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Caz is a piece of work. What I call a "PV"---(permanent victim)--

Angela lacks the spine to draw this to an end...

Michelle will, I think, have to step in!

How Rebecca ends up with Angela is the driving force of the plot right now!

Karenina

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you Karenina.
reply by karenina on 21-Dec-2023
    Welcome!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I thought this whole matter was handled well by Angela. She was obviously trying to be as delicate as possible whilst getting the message over to Caz who is being far from sensitive herself. It's no secret where Rebecca is going to end up but you still manage to maintain the interest and suspense, hooking the reader into wanting to learn more. Well done, Jacob! Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I can't wait to see what Caz is going to tell Angela. I can't believe she expects Angela and Michelle to take care of her and the baby forever. This is a good story, and you are going a good job writing it.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Ulla
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I don't know whether I like this Caz. She seems to ask a lot of people. I enjoyed reading this. It very well written and I will be looking out for the next chapter. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you Ulla.
Comment from BethShelby
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Caz is asking a lot from people. She is like a parasite. She makes no attempt to do anything and expects others to support her. I can't imagine many people doing what these two have done of her already. I know Michelle has had it with her. You story is excellent and you alway manage to keep us in suspense.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth.