Me. Her. Him
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Such a prolific writer you are with a wellspring of words to draw upon creating wonderful sentences. Your characters get more and more interesting with every chapter Irene, and lots of tangled webs going on. That's very cool. I think you've done well. I think this is grammarfraid and a great addition to your book! I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great evening!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Such a prolific writer you are with a wellspring of words to draw upon creating wonderful sentences. Your characters get more and more interesting with every chapter Irene, and lots of tangled webs going on. That's very cool. I think you've done well. I think this is grammarfraid and a great addition to your book! I hope you have a wonderful holiday and a great evening!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from Navada
Too much of this happens and the agencies who should be protecting children don't have the resources they need to do their jobs properly. Caz and other non-fictional children in the same situation you've described here should be taken into care and looked after.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Too much of this happens and the agencies who should be protecting children don't have the resources they need to do their jobs properly. Caz and other non-fictional children in the same situation you've described here should be taken into care and looked after.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from karenina
I'm not sure I'm buying Caz's sad sack story. On the one hand, it might explain her gravitational pull to William. (Another loser like her parents?)
On the other, she seems... conveniently ready with a tale, whenever questioned about why she can't seem to do a thing to prepare for this child she is carrying.
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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I'm not sure I'm buying Caz's sad sack story. On the one hand, it might explain her gravitational pull to William. (Another loser like her parents?)
On the other, she seems... conveniently ready with a tale, whenever questioned about why she can't seem to do a thing to prepare for this child she is carrying.
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Caz had a horrible childhood. I'm hoping she's telling the truth. I'm not positive I trust her completely. I am looking forward to reading more. We're still learning more about the past.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Caz had a horrible childhood. I'm hoping she's telling the truth. I'm not positive I trust her completely. I am looking forward to reading more. We're still learning more about the past.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Austin Yu
Nice, I see you're building up a collection of chapters for this book, and I'm all for it. You continue to use excellent dialogue, as seen between Angela and Caz. There also seems to be a lot of foreshadowing going on, which is crucial when writing a mystery/crime poem or story.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Nice, I see you're building up a collection of chapters for this book, and I'm all for it. You continue to use excellent dialogue, as seen between Angela and Caz. There also seems to be a lot of foreshadowing going on, which is crucial when writing a mystery/crime poem or story.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Jacob, I wanted to give this a go, although I'm late coming into the story, and I'm glad I did. It's well written and an interesting storyline. I will fan you so I don't miss anymore chapters. All best, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Hi, Jacob, I wanted to give this a go, although I'm late coming into the story, and I'm glad I did. It's well written and an interesting storyline. I will fan you so I don't miss anymore chapters. All best, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you Ulla. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
For a child who managed to stay alive in a situation likd that you would think she have some survival skills by now rather than just allowing others to take care of her. I sure that must have worked to make Angela fewl sorry for her. Maybe the sister would be of help if she pressed harded to find out wher she might be. I wonder if Caz has plans to keep the baby.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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For a child who managed to stay alive in a situation likd that you would think she have some survival skills by now rather than just allowing others to take care of her. I sure that must have worked to make Angela fewl sorry for her. Maybe the sister would be of help if she pressed harded to find out wher she might be. I wonder if Caz has plans to keep the baby.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
