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Me. Her. Him

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A hidden past, a devastating truth.

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Comment from karenina
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This seems to be the most clear a headed thing Angela has managed to do! It's very good she managed to get William's address...now hmmm, whatever does Michelle have in mind?

Karenina

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you Karenina.
reply by karenina on 17-Dec-2023
    You are very welcome...
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well, I'm pleased Angela's got William's details at last. This should set in motion the next part of Michelle's plan. There's one sentence confusing me: I feel sure she's going to notice someone's looked at her emails or the very least been that someone's been at her desk? Looking forward to the next chapter. Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you Debbie.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Angela now has the information Michelle needs or wants. I am wondering what will happen next. Angela still needs to open up at least to Paul. This is another good write.

when I arrive at the office next morning. (office the following morning.)

confronting him last night while he sat we sat on the sofa (he sat or we sat not both)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you Barbara.
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm as nervous as Angela about being afraid if she will be caught. She is so anxious about everything. I can't imagine what Michelle is thinking of doing. I enjoying the suspense.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth and thank you for the six star rating as well.
Comment from BethShelby
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I'm as nervous as Angela about being afraid if she will be caught. She is so anxious about everything. I can't imagine what Michelle is thinking of doing. I enjoying the suspense.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2023
    Thank you Beth.