Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter 54"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow Jacob really pumping out the chapters! I say good job. You're a very talented writer! That guy William is a real issue. A piece of work I must say! Another fine chapter! I see no issues with grammar punctuation, sentence structures or subject matter. You're trucking along with some great chapters. I wish you the best luck and I really hope your day is great!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Wow Jacob really pumping out the chapters! I say good job. You're a very talented writer! That guy William is a real issue. A piece of work I must say! Another fine chapter! I see no issues with grammar punctuation, sentence structures or subject matter. You're trucking along with some great chapters. I wish you the best luck and I really hope your day is great!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from karenina
It must be most satisfying to read our various takes on what's happening!
I, for one, feel William is playing the best of mind games... Trying to get a reaction from Angela. I sense she won't fail him. What a fine mess!
Poor Kirsty... Now she's got to deal with him!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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It must be most satisfying to read our various takes on what's happening!
I, for one, feel William is playing the best of mind games... Trying to get a reaction from Angela. I sense she won't fail him. What a fine mess!
Poor Kirsty... Now she's got to deal with him!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina.
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Welcome, Jacob!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's about time Angela comes clean about William. Her entire life is in shambles because she won't discuss it with anybody. What is she waiting for? It's going away on it's own.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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It's about time Angela comes clean about William. Her entire life is in shambles because she won't discuss it with anybody. What is she waiting for? It's going away on it's own.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well, I'm quite relieved for Angela that he's gone. She deserves some good luck. But, somehow, I think that's not the end of things. Could Kirsty enlighten her further, I wonder. This was a nice surprise twist as I expected there to be further tension between William and Angela. Well done for keeping the suspense going! No errors noted. Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Well, I'm quite relieved for Angela that he's gone. She deserves some good luck. But, somehow, I think that's not the end of things. Could Kirsty enlighten her further, I wonder. This was a nice surprise twist as I expected there to be further tension between William and Angela. Well done for keeping the suspense going! No errors noted. Debbie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie.
Comment from BethShelby
Well, at least she still has her job, but she is over thinking everything she assumes other people are thinking about her. She might be right but the one thing I'd think she'd be releaved about is the fact William is gone. I'm sure he isn't out of her life just yet. Her conversation with Kirsty should be interesting.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Well, at least she still has her job, but she is over thinking everything she assumes other people are thinking about her. She might be right but the one thing I'd think she'd be releaved about is the fact William is gone. I'm sure he isn't out of her life just yet. Her conversation with Kirsty should be interesting.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
