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One Man's Calling

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Comment from eliz100
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This is another excellent chapter. Did Ben take the bullet before or after he killed Soapy? I look forward to the next chapter. I hope Ben survives. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2023
    Thank you.
    Ben was shot when Soapy snapped off three quick shots. Ben fired back as Soapy took aim at him.
reply by eliz100 on 17-Dec-2023
    Thanks
Comment from BethShelby
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I hate to see Ben hurt like this. I hope you're aren't going to let him die but then you have once already and he was resurrected. Maybe Beth's prayers came work toward saving him. This was quite a confrontation.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Thank you.
    I really appreciate your very kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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I hate to see Ben hurt like this. I hope you're aren't going to let him die but then you have once already and he was resurrected. Maybe Beth's prayers came work toward saving him. This was quite a confrontation.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2023
    Thank you.
Comment from Wendyanne
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Well we are all hoping that Ben recovers from his injury and then he can tell the truth about who really did kill Soapy! I look forward to reading more from your book.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Thank you. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I'm no dim wit and the story cannot continue without Ben, so he will survive. But you are a stinker for letting him get more than a graze. A big old hairy stinker! I await the next Chapter with bated breath.
Karen

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    Hah!
    50 more chapters!
    Thank you for your fun review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Dec-2023
    50 more? I don't know if I can the torture. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    hah!
    It's way different from what I imagine you are guessing. I'm anxious to hear feedback.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Dec-2023
    Like you are going to keep me from giving you my opinion :-)
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2023
    laughy face here
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 13-Dec-2023
    I see the funny side, the absurd, the whacky, the perverse, I can find the funny in most anything.:-)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Well, now, if this isn't the ultimate trust in God's plan, I don't know what is. Whether Ben dies or not, what happens will be what was meant to be. I've been wondering for a few chapters if Beth will become "One Woman's Calling". It's like she has been groomed for this since her marriage to Ben.

Just a thought . . .

Good action and good twist.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    smiley face here
    Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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A man must have an inner power to stand still and not show any signs after being shot. So, I'm guessing, the good Lord will reach down and touch Ben, who has more to do. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    smiley face here
    Thank you. We'll have to wait and see.
Comment from Ben Colder
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Wow! Brought on drama in this one. I can see this unfolding in Ben's favor just as David and the giant. Yep, God will see him through this. Good one, Bro.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you. And thank you for the six stars!
Comment from Jim Wile
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End of the road for Soapy. For Ben too? I think not. This was an exciting, fact-based chapter that showed the ignominious end to the life of a scoundrel. Seems fitting that he's killed in the effort to disrupt the formation of a group to oppose him.

I'm pretty sure Ben will pull through. It doesn't seem like his calling would end right here. I'm looking forward to a grand conclusion, skillfully conceived, when you finally get there. - Jim

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you.
    Yes, it has been a long road.
Comment from Wendy G
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Now I am wondering if this links back to Ben's promise that he would always love Beth, but did not and could not say that he will never leave her. Is this his end? Maybe. He's human, but has been used mightily by God and his legacy will be enormous. Well written!!
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2023


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
    Thank you!
    I have another 80,000 words already written, but...
    (smiley face here)