Me. Her. Him
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Comment from BethShelby
I think you were dropping hints that would happen all along the girs were warning her about getting the in the bank and she was so careless with it. I wonder if she will admit someone took to her other. I don't think I would.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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I think you were dropping hints that would happen all along the girs were warning her about getting the in the bank and she was so careless with it. I wonder if she will admit someone took to her other. I don't think I would.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you Beth.
Comment from karenina
Isn't this perfect for your Milestone Number 50! (You did get here quickly with these fabulous chapters!)
Congrats on making a splash here at FanStory. I hope you realize by now your work is respected and appreciated...
Damn that William! If there is a bizarre twist and someone else has stolen the money I'll eat my hat!
Wake UP Angela!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Isn't this perfect for your Milestone Number 50! (You did get here quickly with these fabulous chapters!)
Congrats on making a splash here at FanStory. I hope you realize by now your work is respected and appreciated...
Damn that William! If there is a bizarre twist and someone else has stolen the money I'll eat my hat!
Wake UP Angela!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023
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Thank you Karenina. There are quite a few more surprises to come.
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Oh. I have NO DOUBT!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats, Jacob, on your 50th post! Oh wow, I can relate to how she's feeling now (well, mine was a scam by a stranger but it was the same chest-pounding reaction!) This is a great read and moving along nicely. I'm wondering what percentage of women are reading your work as opposed to men because, for me, it seems absolutely tailored to women's taste in literature. Just a thought which has been going through my mind for a while. An excellent read. I'm glad you're posting so frequently. Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Congrats, Jacob, on your 50th post! Oh wow, I can relate to how she's feeling now (well, mine was a scam by a stranger but it was the same chest-pounding reaction!) This is a great read and moving along nicely. I'm wondering what percentage of women are reading your work as opposed to men because, for me, it seems absolutely tailored to women's taste in literature. Just a thought which has been going through my mind for a while. An excellent read. I'm glad you're posting so frequently. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you Debbie. A lot of the thrillers I read, and I read more than a hundred books a year, are written by women, and they all, mostly, have women as main characters so I think that?s why I sort of find it easier to write about women.
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You do it really well too!
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Is it my computer or has FS changed its banding to red?
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I noticed that. It threw me for a moment when I saw it.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
No, the money's gone and that is not good. Bad news all around! What a tangled webb we weave once we practice to deceive.
Crazy stuff! Things are going to get funky now! Nice work! Another fine addition to your book! Keep it coming big fella are you in England by the way? England is a fascinating country, I love the history! Great submission I hope you're having an awesome day!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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No, the money's gone and that is not good. Bad news all around! What a tangled webb we weave once we practice to deceive.
Crazy stuff! Things are going to get funky now! Nice work! Another fine addition to your book! Keep it coming big fella are you in England by the way? England is a fascinating country, I love the history! Great submission I hope you're having an awesome day!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you Lea.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Congratulations on your 50 milestone post. This is a good post to receive it on.
Yep, the money is gone, and I know who took it. It was William. He used you, Angela, go figure. He's a player. I guess you aren't ready to learn that lesson.
how she stiffened when I sat next to her on the sofa. (sat beside her on the sofa)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Congratulations on your 50 milestone post. This is a good post to receive it on.
Yep, the money is gone, and I know who took it. It was William. He used you, Angela, go figure. He's a player. I guess you aren't ready to learn that lesson.
how she stiffened when I sat next to her on the sofa. (sat beside her on the sofa)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023
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Thank you Barbara.