Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh dear, this sounds a bit suspicious, does William have an ulterior motive here, perhaps he is snooping around? A fine chapter here and I am glad Michelle didn't make waves, love Dolly x x x

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2023

Thank you Dolly.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I have a bad feeling about that money. I'll bet she will find it missing. She didnt' wait long about telling Michele about quitting her job. I wonder how long she and William will have a thing before she realizes she can't trust hiem.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Beth.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am guessing William took her money while she was in the shower. Matter of fact, I'd bet on it. He can't be trusted, and he was looking for things in Lauren and Hayley's room. I can't wait to read more. Good writing.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Barbara.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

Well, you've got the three things that make a book really solid money, sex and intrigue. Very good, you've covered all the bases as well as providing some really good dialogue as well as expressing the different emotions. She feels one about having done it with William and 2 about money. So a great chapter I wish you a fine and lovely day is a fine submission!

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Lea.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

This money has been a concern of Michelle's previously. The obvious suspect (if it's indeed missing) is our friendly neighborhood drug dealer.
Holy cow the "you know what's" going to hit the fan if both Angela and Hayley have missing cash. Angela is sometimes dumb as a rock!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Karenina.

reply by karenina on 12-Dec-2023

Thank you! I look forward to your every post!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh yes, the first signs (for Angela) of William's creepy behaviour! Excellently expressed here, your story dwells on that money under the bed before switching with the same theme to the possibility of potential of missing money in the handbag. Love it! "According to my parents (no apostrophe)..." Well done Jacob! I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and they come so quickly:) Debbie

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you Debbie.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is another Will chapter for your book. I read it in us, caught up in the details that you have presented. I wish you a very wonderful day. May you have a most merry Christmas and a very happy and prosperous new year.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you.