Comment from karenina

Excellent

Lightbulb moment here! William is "into drugs" -- and that's a whole new side of him we didn't know. I see Angela as a woman of impulse, who doesn't plan well and tends to let circumstances play themselves out. That's a bit risky in any case, and an oncoming train wreck here!

Lauren's a pit pushy, no?

"In fact, I think it might be an idea if we don't see him again.'"

With Lauren and Michelle trying to dictate Angela's behavior, she's sure to act out even more!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you Karenina.

reply by karenina on 04-Dec-2023

Of course!

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

One person that is attractive to another and the other doesn't like it how interesting. A trio of owies. You really are sending the story up very well. You watch elements entries and emotions for sure! Don't you know it's with grammar punctuation sentence structure or subject matters That's fine entry. Best of luck to you and have a great night!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you Lea.

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

These girls are really into each other's business. They must really feel that William is threat and they are concerned with Angela getting hurt. Angela is resenting thim getting involved.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you Beth.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Angela's friends tried to warn her, and she didn't listen. We know they were right. I do like this story.

I don't like the way how he was looking at you (use either 'way' or 'how' not both)

In fact I think it might be an idea (comma after 'fact')

First I had Michelle telling me (comma after 'First')

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you Barbara.