Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A very sensual 5-7-5 verse in which the flames of passion bring these contrastingly cold hearts together in a firy embrace. This is a very evocative poem which fulfils the brief and is an excellent entry for the contest. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023

Thank you.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nice 5 -7-5 writing that you have done for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a good day and God bless. Have a good weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023

Thank you.