Reviews from
Little Lu Lu.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Paul Manton
Not sure what's going on here Rhonnie - looks like we're mourning for a lost child - if not, the images are very disturbing for a birthday.
I imagine that this was a little girl you knew well - a family member?
Either way, the image and the words are very powerful, and I share your sadness.
Only two days ago I was lighting remembrance candles for four friends I lost in the last three months.
Paul
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
Comment from
Tina Crute
This strikes me as such a unique poem you wrote. I even tried to sing it and its beautiful in thought and felling and rhyme. What a sweet, positive poem to read. Wonderful read!
Tina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
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