Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oooh! Steamy and fabulous! And the artwork is equally perfect. I see this as a contender in this contest. You heard it here first! Good luck to you, Mystery Contestant!! xo

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Hope you are correct. Thanks for read and encouraging feedback. xox

reply by Rachelle Allen on 20-Nov-2023

My pleasure!

reply by Rachelle Allen on 20-Nov-2023

Always my pleasure!! xo

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

What a lovely little romantic poem. I remember those days from many years ago and it was nice to remember them lol. This describes love in its early stages to me although I'm sure others would disagree. Good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Hope would be that it continues through the years, maybe less ardent but a good feeling just the same. Thanks for your read and feedback.

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Great writing. Fantastic presentation and good use of the limited word count. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work and continue to write from the heart. Jacqueline xx

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023

Thanks so much for the enthusiastic review.