Sunrise Serenade
Sounds of country mornings3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and very well written 2-4-2 writing prompt for the contest. I love the bright yellow color for the font and your very descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very lovely and very well written 2-4-2 writing prompt for the contest. I love the bright yellow color for the font and your very descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice presentation to go with your poem.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery and alliteration in line one.
-A good description of the fawn.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-A very nice presentation to go with your poem.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective nature imagery and alliteration in line one.
-A good description of the fawn.
-A very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy, as I did. Thank you for sharing this!
Best wishes.
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy, as I did. Thank you for sharing this!
Best wishes.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2023
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Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.