Mouse and Blouse
A fun quatrain3 total reviews
Comment from patricia dillon
I like your little rhymes. You are very ingenious. I had to look up scouse. Am I to take it that Minni was a native of Liverpool? I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
I like your little rhymes. You are very ingenious. I had to look up scouse. Am I to take it that Minni was a native of Liverpool? I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards
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You're welcome.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Very cute adorable poem about a mischievous little mouse. Clever choice of words and what a cute apology gift, scouse (delicious stew). Great job! I love the color choice as well for the background.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
Very cute adorable poem about a mischievous little mouse. Clever choice of words and what a cute apology gift, scouse (delicious stew). Great job! I love the color choice as well for the background.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice presentation.
-The note was helpful.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines about
Minni and her neighbor.
-You do a good job showing
how Minni felt, and then she
did what a lot of people do;
made something that made
her feel better and that she
could have for dinner. Maybe she'd
even share with Mrs. Grouse.
-You could take this to another
level in a different poem.
-Well done; good luck!!!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
-Nice presentation.
-The note was helpful.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines about
Minni and her neighbor.
-You do a good job showing
how Minni felt, and then she
did what a lot of people do;
made something that made
her feel better and that she
could have for dinner. Maybe she'd
even share with Mrs. Grouse.
-You could take this to another
level in a different poem.
-Well done; good luck!!!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. With kind regards
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You are very welcome.