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The Life Of The Tooth Fairy

Fun!

4 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Um, Tooth Fairy, you must have written this poem long, long ago, because I know for a FACT --from my students who share this information with me-- that these days you never leave less than FIVE dollars. And, on several occasions --especially for a first tooth-- you've left TEN.

But regardless of the amount bestowed, you ARE an amazing creature, and I hope you do really well in this contest. xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much! I am thinking in the past I guess. xoxo
reply by Rachelle Allen on 10-Nov-2023
    Yes, having fond memories, I bet!!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Yes I was!
reply by Rachelle Allen on 10-Nov-2023
    hahahhaha
Comment from créateur d'histoire
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I loved this! You had a great and cheerful ending.You're rhyming was great.The Ryme did not take over the essence of the story. Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is a unique and interesting poem for the challenge. Good rhyming and imagery make this fun to read. I enjoyed this excellent work!

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much!
Comment from lancellot
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This very nice. I don't think I've seen a tooth fairy poem but this works. you have a good rhyme scheme, and this could fit for children or their parents, as the words are simple to follow and it reads quickly.

A very strong entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much!