Me. Her. Him
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Me. Her. Him - Chapter Eleven"A hidden past, a devastating truth.
8 total reviews
Comment from Janis M.
This chapter paints a fairly accurate picture of a marriage turning cold, with the husbands frustrations of being put aside. From everything I've learned about men is they need to feel that they are needed or else they become cold and distant. Having a wall placed up is a big mistake.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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This chapter paints a fairly accurate picture of a marriage turning cold, with the husbands frustrations of being put aside. From everything I've learned about men is they need to feel that they are needed or else they become cold and distant. Having a wall placed up is a big mistake.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Thank you Janis.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The suspense is killing me. I am not sure when we will get the mystery solved. I think to develop some of the other characters or side plots. If this is not helpful, ignore it. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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This is another excellent chapter. The suspense is killing me. I am not sure when we will get the mystery solved. I think to develop some of the other characters or side plots. If this is not helpful, ignore it. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed this episode which show a growing tension between Angela and Paul. She doesn't seem very sure of him because he might leave her if she unburdons herself to him and he would make her call the police. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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I enjoyed this episode which show a growing tension between Angela and Paul. She doesn't seem very sure of him because he might leave her if she unburdons herself to him and he would make her call the police. Nicely written.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2023
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Thank you Beth and for the six stars as well, I?m really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from karenina
With every chapter, my mind shifts a bit and despite my determination not to, I find myself reading "clues" into every action. (which means you're doing your job!)
Odd (and yet so typical) that Ange isn't being at all honest with her husband yet her first instinct it to bemoan the fact he took his phone upstairs with him, as she'd (it seems) be more than willing to breach his trust and crack that thing open to see who he was texting!)
Hmmm. Maybe he knows more than he's letting on...
(I'll be up for the next chapter when you are!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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With every chapter, my mind shifts a bit and despite my determination not to, I find myself reading "clues" into every action. (which means you're doing your job!)
Odd (and yet so typical) that Ange isn't being at all honest with her husband yet her first instinct it to bemoan the fact he took his phone upstairs with him, as she'd (it seems) be more than willing to breach his trust and crack that thing open to see who he was texting!)
Hmmm. Maybe he knows more than he's letting on...
(I'll be up for the next chapter when you are!)
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Karenina, the next chapter will be posted soon.
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Thank goodness!
Comment from royowen
It seems to me deciding that someone has told the truth about something is a decision rather than a fact, but then we choose, are humans trustworthy, some perhaps, but not all the time, sometimes we will be protecting skmethong, but then loving someone can be a considered decision, well done, gratbpost, blessings Roy,
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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It seems to me deciding that someone has told the truth about something is a decision rather than a fact, but then we choose, are humans trustworthy, some perhaps, but not all the time, sometimes we will be protecting skmethong, but then loving someone can be a considered decision, well done, gratbpost, blessings Roy,
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Roy, I?m pleased that you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's difficult keeping secrets from your partner as suspicious start thoughts of doubt on both sides and the rot sets in. You have created some tension here in this chapter Jacob, l love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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It's difficult keeping secrets from your partner as suspicious start thoughts of doubt on both sides and the rot sets in. You have created some tension here in this chapter Jacob, l love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Dolly!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're doing a great job building suspense in this story. I'm now afraid that Angela relationship with Paul is strained and she could possibly lose him over this. I am really liking this story.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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You're doing a great job building suspense in this story. I'm now afraid that Angela relationship with Paul is strained and she could possibly lose him over this. I am really liking this story.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you Barbara, I'm glad that you're enjoying it.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Chapter 11 and no action. No movement. Rehashing and rehashing the same thoughts with no differences. She is still not being honest with anyone except maybe Michelle. The story is not moving. Karen
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Chapter 11 and no action. No movement. Rehashing and rehashing the same thoughts with no differences. She is still not being honest with anyone except maybe Michelle. The story is not moving. Karen
Comment Written 10-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2023
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Thank you.
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Have a good weekend. Wet and sloppy here. karen