Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the November 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a lovely little haiku style poem in a haiku style. I love the image of the smiling pumpkins in the frost. I think this is a very good contest entry. good luck

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written November 5-7-5. You used great descriptive words and have the word November in there and very cute imagery for the smiling pumpkins. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you, that's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you, I always appreciate hearing from you. :)

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

Love the one on the right. His devil-may-care" attitude.
The one in the middle - pure evil.
The first one on the left, like he's not quite sure. He just knows he's cold.
Seems to me, frosty grins are waning :)
Katharine

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Hahaha! Thanks for this delightful review. :)

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

A very cute "November 5-7-5" entry! The photo perfectly fit your words. As many of these posts did, you made me feel a bit chilly. But, I believe you will warm up the judges with this prize entry!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you, I appreciate this nice review. :)

reply by jim vecchio on 08-Nov-2023

Hope you do well in the contest!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Oh yes, a great entry here! I can feel the cold and I'm sure those Jack o' lanterns can. Excellent monorhyme to go with it. I applaud you for this as I considered the contest but declined because our current weather conditions are utterly uninspiring! Great imaginative post. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023

Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)