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Beside The Volcano

Dance Of Mexico

4 total reviews 
Comment from Wy Jung
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Having just left 5 months on the Big Island of Hawaii, this one got my attention. I love the way you implemented it as well as the accompanying art which is a perfect fit. My only suggestion would be a wee bit larger print to have it not be overpowered by the image, but even as is, I'd say it'd darn near perfect. Well done. ~WY

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
    Thank you Wy

    Judith
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I liked your poem. The dancers in the picture are bright and cheery. Ive been to cancun mexico. It was beautuful The picture goes well with the poem. Nice rhyming scheme. Great job

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
    Thank you Brenda
Comment from Elaine Westheimer
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This poem has a good flow of rhythm and rhyme. The story filled with rich description kept me reading to its poignant ending. Her solemn face contrasts with the dance and her passion.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    Thank you Elaine

    Judith
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This has a chilling sting in the tale Judith, a well rhymed post full of traditional dance and bold passion, I enjoyed the ride, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2023

reply by the author on 05-Nov-2023
    You are so perceptive Dolly. Thank you

    Judith