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It's November

An explanation about the Melbourne Cup Day. I'm not a fan.

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Comment from Wils
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It's funny what Australia revolves its life around; the Boxing Day Test, AFL Grand Final and a bloody horse race! Now that I live in the US I miss all three, even though one can take a flying leap. think you can guess which one.
Geoff

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    I'm guessing (clothes) horses?
    I succumbed to the AFL after I got married. My husband is a one-eyed Geelong Cats supporter.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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You sound like a lot of us Americans sound, during the Kentucky Derby in America, that sounds very similar, from your full description. This made me laugh. It's a great topic for a 100 word flash. I appreciate that you managed, also, to add the two words, Whoopie do. lol Those two words speak volumes; Great work for the challenge!

Best wishes,

Alex



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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thanks for this Alex your words as always are encouraging and I have done a little editing without disturbing the word count.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Yes, I don't blame you! All a bit pretentious! Your 100 word flash reads well in those punchy short sentences but sometimes a lack of punctuation means I have to re-read e.g. "and pretty(,) as opposed to functional(,) shoes." Love the 'Whoopee do' which speaks volumes for your opinion of the charade. Great entry! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Debbie. You read the contempt well! Also thank you for the punctuation pointer; it is duly fixed.