The Halloween Bash
Halloween short story2 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this story gave me the chilly:) and poor Oscar manipulated into killing at such an young age. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Wow, this story gave me the chilly:) and poor Oscar manipulated into killing at such an young age. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I love a good horror movies. They inspired my writing.
Comment from Sarita Méndez
Wow ! What a bloody story ! Perfect of this Halloween time !
It seems that you wrote "follower" instead of "follow her" at a moment in your text, unless I misunderstood what you wanted to say.
Thanks for sharing and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Wow ! What a bloody story ! Perfect of this Halloween time !
It seems that you wrote "follower" instead of "follow her" at a moment in your text, unless I misunderstood what you wanted to say.
Thanks for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much for your feedback. And thank you for pointing out the error. I will fix that, but I?m glad you enjoyed it.