Venus Landing
Prisoner9 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this is an awesome story congrats:) I think it was one of the best story for the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Wow, this is an awesome story congrats:) I think it was one of the best story for the contest. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Your creative take made your entry stand out from the crowd.
My uncle worked as a botanist and he owned one and as a kid I would sit and watch fascinated .
I love to watch spiders make their webs and roll up their meals. ( biggrin)
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
Your creative take made your entry stand out from the crowd.
My uncle worked as a botanist and he owned one and as a kid I would sit and watch fascinated .
I love to watch spiders make their webs and roll up their meals. ( biggrin)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
Comment from BethShelby
This is nice 100 words story dealing with the subject of prisoner. It is bad enough that some animals must eat other animals in order to stay alive but it seems unnecessary that plants need to eat live creature. I wonder if they can survive without them. He looks like he is pretty well entrapped. Nice contest entry.
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This is nice 100 words story dealing with the subject of prisoner. It is bad enough that some animals must eat other animals in order to stay alive but it seems unnecessary that plants need to eat live creature. I wonder if they can survive without them. He looks like he is pretty well entrapped. Nice contest entry.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Brilliant! What an imaginative interpretation for this contest brief! Your story is excellently outlined and with great pathos as I'm now very sad and concerned for the grasshopper's demise and future for his family. Well done on bringing this entry so vividly to life! And good luck! A strong contender! Debbie
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Brilliant! What an imaginative interpretation for this contest brief! Your story is excellently outlined and with great pathos as I'm now very sad and concerned for the grasshopper's demise and future for his family. Well done on bringing this entry so vividly to life! And good luck! A strong contender! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is full of humour even though this is a tragic situation for the grasshopper and I loved your inventiveness here for this contest, you made me smile and who would have thought a plant could do this, the insect was fooled, a fine post, love Dolly x
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This is full of humour even though this is a tragic situation for the grasshopper and I loved your inventiveness here for this contest, you made me smile and who would have thought a plant could do this, the insect was fooled, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
Comment from Jacob1395
What a horrible way to die, I could feel the agony the poor creature was going through, especially knowing he couldn't escape and go back to his children. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
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What a horrible way to die, I could feel the agony the poor creature was going through, especially knowing he couldn't escape and go back to his children. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Very cool, what I neat idea good one. Can you imagine if you had a big one of those and you just sort of sit on it, and then your lunch can't be good, LOL. Great picture, really cool written piece of work you got here. No, it's idea for it too I think you're esthetically pleasing. Cause you know, issues with spelling grammar, sentence structure or punctuation. Find job best of luck to you, hope you have a great night!
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Very cool, what I neat idea good one. Can you imagine if you had a big one of those and you just sort of sit on it, and then your lunch can't be good, LOL. Great picture, really cool written piece of work you got here. No, it's idea for it too I think you're esthetically pleasing. Cause you know, issues with spelling grammar, sentence structure or punctuation. Find job best of luck to you, hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very creative and interesting idea for the challenge. It's written very well, too. I always find perspective and interesting tool, both in fine art and writing. You have used perspective well, here.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
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This is a very creative and interesting idea for the challenge. It's written very well, too. I always find perspective and interesting tool, both in fine art and writing. You have used perspective well, here.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
Comment from pome lover
Now, that is what I call original! And if, when I read the title, I hadn't immediately seen the Venus Fly Trap, I would have thought space travel.
Very clever entry for the Prisoner theme. Good luck with your entry.
Katharine
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Now, that is what I call original! And if, when I read the title, I hadn't immediately seen the Venus Fly Trap, I would have thought space travel.
Very clever entry for the Prisoner theme. Good luck with your entry.
Katharine
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
