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Thirst satisfied.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Janis Miller
Creepy! Those eyes could turn someone to stone. Vampire procreation is quite interesting. Makes you wonder if they ever get STDs if they bite the same person!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
Ha, ha. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from
Gillian Berg Vogt
Certainly leaves me feeling squeamish and uncomfortable. At first I thought it was just that I hate all things horror, but as I reread your poem, I realized that there were more implications given in these few words than first realized. Am I incapacitated by the bite and overtaken? Am I turned into a vampire? What part of my will is gone? Either way, yuck. While somewhat straightforward, it made me think way more than I cared to! So, well done. :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
Thank you for your review, it is all of the above.
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