A Bite Too Late
Vampire 5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hahaha! This one. Is absolutely awesome! I know who you are but I won't say anything. Your haiku is priceless. You definitely have my vote! I do wish you all the best luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
Hahaha! This one. Is absolutely awesome! I know who you are but I won't say anything. Your haiku is priceless. You definitely have my vote! I do wish you all the best luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2023
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Hey, Debi, hello. Thank you so much for the great review. I was hoping some folks would get a chuckle out of this silly piece. I really appreciate the gracious stars and support. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from JSD
Most amusing entry. A lot contained within these few seventeen syllables. Great picture to accompany it too, Dracula recoiling! Well done and good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
Most amusing entry. A lot contained within these few seventeen syllables. Great picture to accompany it too, Dracula recoiling! Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the great review, John. I appreciate the stars and the stop in. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol this is such a funny little haiku about a vampire. I was not expecting that punchline and you certainly made me chuckle. Good luck in the contest. This might be a winner!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
Lol this is such a funny little haiku about a vampire. I was not expecting that punchline and you certainly made me chuckle. Good luck in the contest. This might be a winner!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Wendy. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.