Night Shivers
Contest entry8 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Yiiiiiikes! Terror doled out in just seventeen syllables! Love the red background and the teeny font, like it's trying to hide from the scary thing over there. You artistry is coming through on this one in a big way. xo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Yiiiiiikes! Terror doled out in just seventeen syllables! Love the red background and the teeny font, like it's trying to hide from the scary thing over there. You artistry is coming through on this one in a big way. xo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I need to go back and check out my own portfolio. I don't really even remember this one. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That scared me, at least. That's a good horror entry for the prompt. You use just the right words and colorful imagery to do the trick. Good luck with the contest.
Alexandra
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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That scared me, at least. That's a good horror entry for the prompt. You use just the right words and colorful imagery to do the trick. Good luck with the contest.
Alexandra
Comment Written 26-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Lisasview
Oh gosh just in time for Halloween... Vampires.... I really enjoyed this one..
so the very best of luck in the Vampire 5-7-5 contest...
I also really loved the red background such a perfect choice for your poem.
Lisasview, still in Spain
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Oh gosh just in time for Halloween... Vampires.... I really enjoyed this one..
so the very best of luck in the Vampire 5-7-5 contest...
I also really loved the red background such a perfect choice for your poem.
Lisasview, still in Spain
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
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You are welcome,
Lisa
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You are very welcome,
Lisa
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a good entry for the vampire contest especially with its limitation of 17 syllables in total. I imagine that the heart is beating so loudly as mine would lol. Good luck. I enjoyed this!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is a good entry for the vampire contest especially with its limitation of 17 syllables in total. I imagine that the heart is beating so loudly as mine would lol. Good luck. I enjoyed this!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Where is Vlad the Impaler? Vampires never scared me. Frankenstien's monster didn't scare me. The mummy is what scared the bejesus out of me. As an adult I know that I could certainly outrun it, and he could not open doors, but as a kid!!!!! Your poem was creepy, in the right way. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Where is Vlad the Impaler? Vampires never scared me. Frankenstien's monster didn't scare me. The mummy is what scared the bejesus out of me. As an adult I know that I could certainly outrun it, and he could not open doors, but as a kid!!!!! Your poem was creepy, in the right way. Karen
Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
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u r welcome
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u r welcome Karen :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We can never feel another person's heartbeat but we can see fear in their eyes and this is a great one for Halloween, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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We can never feel another person's heartbeat but we can see fear in their eyes and this is a great one for Halloween, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Janis Miller
This is a good entry for the contest. I don't have any suggestions. The syllable count follows the competitions rules. I think I might have chosen a different word beside "yonder" (afar or distant) as it seems to take the spookiness out of the poem, but that is just a small minded opinion.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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This is a good entry for the contest. I don't have any suggestions. The syllable count follows the competitions rules. I think I might have chosen a different word beside "yonder" (afar or distant) as it seems to take the spookiness out of the poem, but that is just a small minded opinion.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Why are you writing? Run man, run!!! Ha! I really love this Halloween season and all of the related writings.
This is a fun 5/7/5, but from the looks of your piece, you are a goner.
D
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Why are you writing? Run man, run!!! Ha! I really love this Halloween season and all of the related writings.
This is a fun 5/7/5, but from the looks of your piece, you are a goner.
D
Comment Written 24-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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Thank you!