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A third party for President 2024

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Comment from nomi338
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That is certainly a hat of a different color. I think looking like a gay Groucho Marx might just be weird enough to throw the suspects of their game. Good luck with that.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    A little humor here.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    A little humor here.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, that Lowell is sneaky - was able to hack into the Yale graduates' database and got himself and the hotdog selling pal doctorates? I don't know how they will be able to analyze Betty and AA.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    AA is not involved. It is MauMau.
reply by lyenochka on 24-Oct-2023
    Oh, right. But MM has half a brain now so why study him? 😊
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Bill
Can I ask have you based your characters on any 'real life people?
You imagination and concepts make me laugh, it like being in a Laurel and Hardy skit
Love your humour
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    You should reimagine it as a Pons and Ned skit. : )
reply by Chrissy710 on 24-Oct-2023
    Oh Yes I can do that too lol
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm not sure why the disguise for Lowell. So he met them before why must he be unrevcognizable How will they ever solve the crime with GED now deceased.Maybe you are asnxious to find out as we are.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    Psychologists must follow HIPPA laws which means no reporters.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I guess the elite sticks together, until the end. Somehow the powerhouse is in that elite group. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    Thanks, Iza
Comment from royowen
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You have an impressive array of characters Bill, with even Fox Fine qualifying as a clone. And the Psychologist Doctor Sven Galli being called Doctor Gee Whizz.another great work my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2023
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 24-Oct-2023
    Welcome