Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge and your presentation is very good, too. You also use evocative words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
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Comment from
JanPerry
It's not true. They were deceased decades before they died. I visited them often but got snubbed and snubbing is all they're good for.
Even though they got me through the hard times, sometimes I just want someone to talk to!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2023
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