Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from BethShelby
I thought DED had already dezombitized GED. How can they have him if he's only a ghost that no one but Ned can see? And why is Betty admitting to being the killer?She must be trying to protect Ned.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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I thought DED had already dezombitized GED. How can they have him if he's only a ghost that no one but Ned can see? And why is Betty admitting to being the killer?She must be trying to protect Ned.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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They do not have GED; he is out of the picture. I make it a practice of painting myself into a corner to stimulate original storylines.
Comment from Teri7
This is very interesting. Now I can't wait to find out who the killer is and how they killed them. You used great descriptive words. Thanks for sharing! teri
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This is very interesting. Now I can't wait to find out who the killer is and how they killed them. You used great descriptive words. Thanks for sharing! teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Teri
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you are so welcome! I bet you entertain your wife all the time with your funny characters! I hope you both have a very happy and blessed day!
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This is why you should not bet, Teri
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Bill, I don't think I do bet, but thanks for the wise advice! Blessings, Teri
Comment from nomi338
So Betty is going to try to fall on her sword. How valiant. GED is no more, so who takes the blame now? I will wait to see how the creator of this works that out.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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So Betty is going to try to fall on her sword. How valiant. GED is no more, so who takes the blame now? I will wait to see how the creator of this works that out.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Got any ideas?
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Not me pal. You are on your own.
Comment from lyenochka
I know! It was Sam Anthrax who was Betty's clone, right? I keep wanting to know when this Bull connects with the characters in your other book. But then, Weirdo may be someone much bigger than we knew if he considers himself "Master of the Universe"!
I human bite. (One) because I read somewhere to never start a sentence with a numeral.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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I know! It was Sam Anthrax who was Betty's clone, right? I keep wanting to know when this Bull connects with the characters in your other book. But then, Weirdo may be someone much bigger than we knew if he considers himself "Master of the Universe"!
I human bite. (One) because I read somewhere to never start a sentence with a numeral.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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The word was actually supposed to be *A*. I only misspell words, Helen.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This script seems to have a humorous slant in spite of it being a murder mystery in progress. Here is a good part I smiled at:
Lt. D'weir: Master of the Universe.
Chin : This is Sergeant Chin. Is that how you answer your phone, Lieutenant?
Lt. D'weir: Is it me speaking?
I liked reading this. Hopefully they catch the culprit!
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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This script seems to have a humorous slant in spite of it being a murder mystery in progress. Here is a good part I smiled at:
Lt. D'weir: Master of the Universe.
Chin : This is Sergeant Chin. Is that how you answer your phone, Lieutenant?
Lt. D'weir: Is it me speaking?
I liked reading this. Hopefully they catch the culprit!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Christie