Comment from JSD

Excellent

Excellent response to the prompt. I might try this one myself in a bit. I like the way you have approached this and your rhyme and syllables are spot on. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thanks for a great review. Good luck if you enter.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I agree poetry should both stir the soul and also the emotions expressed should, hopefully, free the soul of the writer. Well expressed, and good luck in the contest.
cheers.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thanks for the nice review