Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Whew! I'm glad that DED de-frocked/de-cloaked D-red as that guy is not to be trusted with zombie-creating powers. AA's poem makes the scene much more somber and serious.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thank you, Helen, for giving this scene a look, and thank you for the boost. Bill

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Well now these characters were all frozen while DED dealt with Zombie Ged, have they forgotten the Z-Ged was the culprit? Is Ned off the hook or does he still need a lawyer?
I'm glad D-Red got demoted back to dealing with bugs. AA is a pretty good poet.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Thank you, Beth, for the positive review.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Oh dear, this scene is more like an horror scene than anything else. Everybody's affected and doesn't quite know what to do. That's the bottom line, I think.
This is great, Bill, and so well thought out. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Thank you, Ulla.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Better, and I am pleased that Pons did not get attacked by zombie GED. I am now ready to move on from here and be further grossed out by your bizarre story telling.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Your kindness is matched only by your good taste in zombie literature.

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Just have to have a laugh at this mayhem. I am not totally sure what is going on but that does not matter. Bring on more mayhem and totally insane characters.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023

Thanks, Barry