Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from kahpot
This is becoming very intriguing, as nobody seems to have a clue who is targeted or is committing the murders? Another excellent write and read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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This is becoming very intriguing, as nobody seems to have a clue who is targeted or is committing the murders? Another excellent write and read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
This keeps getting wilder and more people are being murdered but Bull and Weirdo will never be able to prove who did the killing. I wonder how this case will be solved.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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This keeps getting wilder and more people are being murdered but Bull and Weirdo will never be able to prove who did the killing. I wonder how this case will be solved.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2023
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Me too.
Comment from BethShelby
The Plot thickens. The surpreme court canadate is dead
The is part is being killed off one by one. If this keeps up there will be no third party and we'll have to vote for and a Democrat or Republican.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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The Plot thickens. The surpreme court canadate is dead
The is part is being killed off one by one. If this keeps up there will be no third party and we'll have to vote for and a Democrat or Republican.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I want to keep readers off balance, but I am really only succeeding at chasing them off it seems.
Comment from nomi338
GED must be pretty hungry to have devoured two sets of brains in such a short period of time. It looks like we may be headed towards a pivotal point in the story as things are definitely heating up. I can smell brains in the air, and your boy GED does not seem to care.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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GED must be pretty hungry to have devoured two sets of brains in such a short period of time. It looks like we may be headed towards a pivotal point in the story as things are definitely heating up. I can smell brains in the air, and your boy GED does not seem to care.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I have added two more universes to this story line. The Fox and Felix Fines and Inspector Bull Schlitz. I hope to drag this part out until Halloween and then do something that allows the campaign to continue after the murders.
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As my friend Buhwheat would say "Otay!"
Comment from royowen
It w seems the bodies are going to pile up, considering that brains as delicious favourite for Zombies, is the unusual appetiser for those that are brainless themselves, no one has the detectives on the job, beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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It w seems the bodies are going to pile up, considering that brains as delicious favourite for Zombies, is the unusual appetiser for those that are brainless themselves, no one has the detectives on the job, beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thanks, Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from Barry Penfold
I just crack up over the names you use in this entertaining script. A lot goes on in a short while. More please . Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I just crack up over the names you use in this entertaining script. A lot goes on in a short while. More please . Take care and have a good day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Barry
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Wow! I'd love to see this one on stage. What a beautiful layout you've given for this screenplay lovely text colors at the right spots, it looks amazing!
Having said that, the subject matter of yours screen play the characters, the conversations, the dialogue, the story itself. Really good. I'm gonna keep an Eye on this one. Because I think that he got something here. I wish you good luck in the rest of the day!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Wow! I'd love to see this one on stage. What a beautiful layout you've given for this screenplay lovely text colors at the right spots, it looks amazing!
Having said that, the subject matter of yours screen play the characters, the conversations, the dialogue, the story itself. Really good. I'm gonna keep an Eye on this one. Because I think that he got something here. I wish you good luck in the rest of the day!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thank you, Lea