Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This story gets stranger and stranger. But it's good to see the Fine brothers again. I liked the fun reference to FOX news and hope that Fox gives better news in the interview.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

I will have five stories going here, I think.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I have a question. Why? Why in the world have you led me to this confusing place in the story? I am so confused I'm not sure who I am anymore. How in the world are you keeping this story straight. Do you even sleep anymore, I would be up all night just trying to figure the next development. You amaze me.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you, nomi. I'm trying to build as many story lines as possible.

reply by nomi338 on 28-Sep-2023

Whew!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well written script you have penned. You used very cute words and dialogue. I do not see how you can keep up with this as you are writing it! You are very good with this script! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thanks, Teri

reply by Teri7 on 28-Sep-2023

you are so welcome!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I getting to like these guys, there's not too many bright ones among them. They are great creations, and as a mob are growing rapidly in number, and great names, most imaginative, well done Bill, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thank you, Roy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Another great script, I guess like the characters I will have to learn to change, as these characters progress, I think I am missing the banter and the lingo once used, the humor still remains as does the confusion in conversations, though my smile and laughter are wanning, maybe I need another beer****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Beer might help.

reply by kahpot on 28-Sep-2023

Hic!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

This is so funny:"Felix: Yeah, is she available? Is she cute?

MauMau: I meant Fox News, not these fools.

Zora steps up.

Zora: When is our interview with Fox?

Fox : We can begin now.

Zora: I meant Fox News.

Felix: My name's Felix. I' m news. " very funny play of words. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2023

Thanks, Iza