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Beautiful poetry written primarily in this state
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Comment from
Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem about the Palms at midnight. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work you chose and your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2023
Thank you so much Terry for reviewing this. There's another one coming up soon about the sharks!
Doctor Ricky text me back and I'm not ready to leave her
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Our children are always watching and learning from us. We set the example for them. We are their first teachers. Thank you for sharing this post with us.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2023
When I was writing this Barbara.
I thought about basically the palm trees but then I changed it so that we could realize.
Realize that our children are the world and when we pass away.
Yes, they take over not the other way around unfortunately.
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