Coffee
Pleiades poem8 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Coffee was a cleaver C word to use.
Really enjoyed it and I love your image that tells it all.
I wish you the very best of luck in the upcoming Pleiades Poetry contest...
Actually, I believe the voting has begun.
Lisasview
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Coffee was a cleaver C word to use.
Really enjoyed it and I love your image that tells it all.
I wish you the very best of luck in the upcoming Pleiades Poetry contest...
Actually, I believe the voting has begun.
Lisasview
Comment Written 18-Sep-2023
Comment from jaded831
Excellent entry, I need my morning coffee to clear my head before starting the day. You creatively weaved together a poem, any coffee drinker, can relate to. Your poem is at the top of my list. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent entry, I need my morning coffee to clear my head before starting the day. You creatively weaved together a poem, any coffee drinker, can relate to. Your poem is at the top of my list. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The poem is clever. The picture was complementary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
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The poem is clever. The picture was complementary.I Imagine this was hard to do. When you get a chance, please read my first lune poem, my first poem period, and my first writing here, "Remittance". Tell me what you think. Karen
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. I love coffee. We drink it in both, the l morning and nightly, in our home. Your presentation is very good, too. You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
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This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. I love coffee. We drink it in both, the l morning and nightly, in our home. Your presentation is very good, too. You use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Sally Law
Wonderfully penned poem in this unique form. You did a splendid job, and, as a coffee freakazoid, I loved it.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
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Wonderfully penned poem in this unique form. You did a splendid job, and, as a coffee freakazoid, I loved it.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
You've done an excellent job of creating a Pleiades poem, beginning each line with a word using with the same first letter as the title. You've even made your poem rhyme. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
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You've done an excellent job of creating a Pleiades poem, beginning each line with a word using with the same first letter as the title. You've even made your poem rhyme. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This Pleiades poem, Coffee, has the proper formatting and coincides with current cravings consumers have for coffee confections, condiments, and collateral cuisine.
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This Pleiades poem, Coffee, has the proper formatting and coincides with current cravings consumers have for coffee confections, condiments, and collateral cuisine.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Eleri
This is a good idea for a Pleiades poem and I like the rhyming. However, your meter is a bit changeable from seven to nine beats per line, and it should be 'Costa Rica grows..' not 'Costa Rica grow..'
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
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This is a good idea for a Pleiades poem and I like the rhyming. However, your meter is a bit changeable from seven to nine beats per line, and it should be 'Costa Rica grows..' not 'Costa Rica grow..'
Good luck in the contest
Eleri
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023