I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from Isabel Fontes
I enjoyed reading this poem, especially the existential questioning of happiness.
The structure and flow of the poem are also well executed.
Formulating a good point of view successfully conveys it in your free verse.
I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I enjoyed reading this poem, especially the existential questioning of happiness.
The structure and flow of the poem are also well executed.
Formulating a good point of view successfully conveys it in your free verse.
I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I just made a change to the poem. Wrong spacing and a superfluous word. Thanks to you too.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from JSD
Thoughtfully questioning eternal optimism. An interesting viewpoint, successfully conveyed in your free verse. I'm not entirely sure you divide your parts helpfully, but otherwise, well done.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Thoughtfully questioning eternal optimism. An interesting viewpoint, successfully conveyed in your free verse. I'm not entirely sure you divide your parts helpfully, but otherwise, well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Well done to you too. I made a change. If I can figure out how to do it, I?ll nominate you.
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Cool. Thank you.