Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Patch and Ruby's Plan "Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
45 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, this is so cute. Not only do these cats have nine lives, but they have ESP too. One of them must take after their great grandma? Hmm?
Your poem reads and flows well and has good humor within.
Of special note:
Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress
(Very cute imagery. I could just see Patch in his manly denim, and Ruby in her pink and frilly dress.)
Well done. Good rhyming. This poem made me smile.
Good morning to you, my sweet Sis. Xo. M
p.s. Maybe Patch and Ruby need to dress up for Halloween?
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
  |
Hi Debi, this is so cute. Not only do these cats have nine lives, but they have ESP too. One of them must take after their great grandma? Hmm?
Your poem reads and flows well and has good humor within.
Of special note:
Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress
(Very cute imagery. I could just see Patch in his manly denim, and Ruby in her pink and frilly dress.)
Well done. Good rhyming. This poem made me smile.
Good morning to you, my sweet Sis. Xo. M
p.s. Maybe Patch and Ruby need to dress up for Halloween?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023
-
Hi there Sweetie, and thank you for this kind and fun review and words. It was fun to write after Kenzie decided to move and said her cat was acting weird. I laughed and said it reminded me of Helen's cat and a lightbulb went off. Funny how it started to feel real after a while. Haha! Thanks for your generous six stars too, my dear sotu!!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
loved this poem about two kitty cats scheming about their upcoming move with their humans. Cats I am convinced are alien creatures from another dimension, who barely tolerate their human friends.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
 |
loved this poem about two kitty cats scheming about their upcoming move with their humans. Cats I am convinced are alien creatures from another dimension, who barely tolerate their human friends.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Hi Jake, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Raul1
It is wonderful how cats can get along with each other but not all of them because they tend to fight against each other. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Interesting.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
It is wonderful how cats can get along with each other but not all of them because they tend to fight against each other. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Interesting.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Raul '. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem. '
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Sanku
I know all about patch's adventure and have listened to her soliloquy .Now She is conspiring with Rubi to keep a control over their missus...so cute. i am an unashamed lover of cats!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
I know all about patch's adventure and have listened to her soliloquy .Now She is conspiring with Rubi to keep a control over their missus...so cute. i am an unashamed lover of cats!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Santha, thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Hi Debi.
Very sweet tribute to your friend's cat and the move.
Really nice stanzas in 8/6 which is such a great form to write with. It flows well with good strong rhymes.
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
Hi Debi.
Very sweet tribute to your friend's cat and the move.
Really nice stanzas in 8/6 which is such a great form to write with. It flows well with good strong rhymes.
Luv&stuff,
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Katie,.I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
-
You are most welcome!
Comment from Kana2
The cats are so cute! Also, I love how the poem was put together! He was so cheerful and inspiring, as always. It brightened my day to read this. :)))
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
The cats are so cute! Also, I love how the poem was put together! He was so cheerful and inspiring, as always. It brightened my day to read this. :)))
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Kana 2, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is a lovely story telling how Patch and Rudy handle the same move.
Pets are the same as human beings. They have their own behavior , thinking , habits etc
You did a good job sharing with us how Rudy reacts to the move.
Thank you
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
This is a lovely story telling how Patch and Rudy handle the same move.
Pets are the same as human beings. They have their own behavior , thinking , habits etc
You did a good job sharing with us how Rudy reacts to the move.
Thank you
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Hi Chan, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Debi,
What a cute poem about two sweet kitties! Patches has just recovered from her moving ordeal, and is able to share her adventures in moving land. How cute of you to give both girls a poem together.
Have a great rest of your week.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
Hi Debi,
What a cute poem about two sweet kitties! Patches has just recovered from her moving ordeal, and is able to share her adventures in moving land. How cute of you to give both girls a poem together.
Have a great rest of your week.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Rhonda, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
-
Oops- and for sure I can't forget your gracious six stars! You are awesome, sweetie!!!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
Thanks for sharing the pictures, notes, and poem, Debi. Both are lovely cats. You set up the situation very well in the first verse. Is Kenzie getting her own apartment? I thought she was younger. I like your line about who wears the pants and who wears the dress!
The next verse is very good about how the cats can zoom and became friends, and also decided on a plan of action with the "circle each missus wears on her hand." Ruby is very astute and knew just where to hide the circle. The last two closing lines are very good, too!!
Very well done!!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
Thanks for sharing the pictures, notes, and poem, Debi. Both are lovely cats. You set up the situation very well in the first verse. Is Kenzie getting her own apartment? I thought she was younger. I like your line about who wears the pants and who wears the dress!
The next verse is very good about how the cats can zoom and became friends, and also decided on a plan of action with the "circle each missus wears on her hand." Ruby is very astute and knew just where to hide the circle. The last two closing lines are very good, too!!
Very well done!!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Hi Pam. I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
-
You are very welcome, Debi. Is Kenzie moving or was that just something fun for the kitty?
-
Yes, she's moving. So Lol, you might say, based on a true story.
-
Will she be far away from you, or is she already?
-
No actuallyshe is just moving across the same City to an apartment, they couldn't afford the house any longer. But I found it to sound so familiar (like Helen?s stories) when she told me about Ruby? nervous actions.
So to do the poem was a no brainer. Lol
-
Thanks for sharing, Debi, and I can see why it sounded familiar.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Animals are very intuitive. They always know when something is up. I went on a trip recently and my dogs hung their heads at the site of the suitcase.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
|
Animals are very intuitive. They always know when something is up. I went on a trip recently and my dogs hung their heads at the site of the suitcase.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
-
Mia, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.