Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from lyenochka
I think Abecedari Ann is one of my favorite characters. And she pegged Ned perfectly with:
"he was Ned with a heart of gold;
with the warmest smile and the purest soul,"
Ned for president!! GED can be the clone that actually does the talking for him. Pons will be Ned's chief advisor.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I think Abecedari Ann is one of my favorite characters. And she pegged Ned perfectly with:
"he was Ned with a heart of gold;
with the warmest smile and the purest soul,"
Ned for president!! GED can be the clone that actually does the talking for him. Pons will be Ned's chief advisor.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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I am elevating Ned more and more on his way to something big.
Comment from BethShelby
I think the poem Laureate improving. Ned's previous romance as to kiss a Heshe girl with a breard. She came to town to by material to stick together a new dress. She must have been competeing in the contest to make the prettest dress our of duct tape. I hope she didn't get the beard caught up in that.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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I think the poem Laureate improving. Ned's previous romance as to kiss a Heshe girl with a breard. She came to town to by material to stick together a new dress. She must have been competeing in the contest to make the prettest dress our of duct tape. I hope she didn't get the beard caught up in that.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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What a sight, huh?
Comment from jim vecchio
Uh-Oh! You know what happens each time you post one of these!
My friend got arrested for impersonating a politician. He was just sitting in his office doing nothing. Did you know George Washington had trouble sleeping? He just couldn't lie. What rock group has four men who can't sing? Mount Rushmore. Which one of Washington's officers had the best sense of humor?-Laugheyette.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Uh-Oh! You know what happens each time you post one of these!
My friend got arrested for impersonating a politician. He was just sitting in his office doing nothing. Did you know George Washington had trouble sleeping? He just couldn't lie. What rock group has four men who can't sing? Mount Rushmore. Which one of Washington's officers had the best sense of humor?-Laugheyette.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Someone wake Jim from his punconscious state.
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I'm okay now. I ate fried catfish).
Comment from Isabel Fontes
The story becomes increasingly thrilling as the characters grow more fascinating and daring, and with scenes from future chapters lingering in the reader's mind.
This chapter is full of creativity and imagination. Excellent, Bill.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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The story becomes increasingly thrilling as the characters grow more fascinating and daring, and with scenes from future chapters lingering in the reader's mind.
This chapter is full of creativity and imagination. Excellent, Bill.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Isabel, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
This is in line with the great desire of most men. Toi find a girl in need of being mad whole, and their being the one to accomplish this great feat. Thereby assuming the role of hero in her eyes.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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This is in line with the great desire of most men. Toi find a girl in need of being mad whole, and their being the one to accomplish this great feat. Thereby assuming the role of hero in her eyes.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Ned is actually unassuming and virtually without guile.
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Which makes him a perfect fall guy.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is bonkers Bill! And your multi-coloured font is not helping my concentration. But I do grasp some of that satirical humour and you'll just have to bear with me because I find US politics confusing at the best of times! Looking forward to another perplexing read:)) Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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This is bonkers Bill! And your multi-coloured font is not helping my concentration. But I do grasp some of that satirical humour and you'll just have to bear with me because I find US politics confusing at the best of times! Looking forward to another perplexing read:)) Debbie
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thanks, Debbie
Comment from JSD
Excellent continuation of this satire. So clever. The convoluted electoral process. The initials for committees. All very funny. Great stuff Bill. Keep it up!
John
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Excellent continuation of this satire. So clever. The convoluted electoral process. The initials for committees. All very funny. Great stuff Bill. Keep it up!
John
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John
Comment from Faith Williams
Lol... who writes this stuff indeed?
One thing: I think you have a stray apostrophe, '(We'll), MauMau does not have an intimidating IQ... '
Thanks for sharing, Bill. They certainly brighten up my day.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Lol... who writes this stuff indeed?
One thing: I think you have a stray apostrophe, '(We'll), MauMau does not have an intimidating IQ... '
Thanks for sharing, Bill. They certainly brighten up my day.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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I think the program favors that contraction.