Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Faith Williams
'Insanity knows no boundaries.' Now that's a true statement regarding politics. I outright laughed at 'crazy is where it's at.' Different agendas and chaos galore--sounds like a political debate alright.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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'Insanity knows no boundaries.' Now that's a true statement regarding politics. I outright laughed at 'crazy is where it's at.' Different agendas and chaos galore--sounds like a political debate alright.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2023
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Here is where we are. Thank you for giving this a look.
Comment from judiverse
Yes, if you want to be president, that makes you crazy. Pons is his usual rational self. Ned's been rather silent, but I love his rather Shakespearean reaction to Pons's line:Yer dirty car jumped the shark test gummies, etc. Pons seems the only rational person there. Fun bit with the dropped pants. This would work well on stage. You might try to limit the number of characters on stage. judi
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Yes, if you want to be president, that makes you crazy. Pons is his usual rational self. Ned's been rather silent, but I love his rather Shakespearean reaction to Pons's line:Yer dirty car jumped the shark test gummies, etc. Pons seems the only rational person there. Fun bit with the dropped pants. This would work well on stage. You might try to limit the number of characters on stage. judi
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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I know, Judi. I always load the stage up. My thought is that as I go along the players' parts will be obvious for a break in the scene.
Comment from Isabel Fontes
Well, and the story continues...
Who will win? That is the question.
And the dancing is still in the air.
We will see the scenes from the following chapters.
I continued to enjoy reading!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Well, and the story continues...
Who will win? That is the question.
And the dancing is still in the air.
We will see the scenes from the following chapters.
I continued to enjoy reading!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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thanks, Isabel
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from nomi338
Why do I imagine I hear "Nyuk, Nyuk, hey Moe", in the background.? This is right out of the three Stooges isn't it? If not it certainly sounds like it could be, or maybe it's the Mark Brothers I'm thinking of. Maybe even Laurel and Hardy.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Why do I imagine I hear "Nyuk, Nyuk, hey Moe", in the background.? This is right out of the three Stooges isn't it? If not it certainly sounds like it could be, or maybe it's the Mark Brothers I'm thinking of. Maybe even Laurel and Hardy.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Slapstick is always funny. A play needs motion and surprise to be watchable. There is nothing new under the sun, nomi. I may add a zombie or superhero if that will help.
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I hope you didn't think this was a criticism. I love this type of comedy. I am usually reduced to being in stitches when watching.
Comment from BethShelby
These skits are always intertaining. Especially when Ned is present. Pons is the only voice of reason. It seems the tricksters only tricks the yank peoples pants down. I've not heard of that one being used in Washington. At least, not literally.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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These skits are always intertaining. Especially when Ned is present. Pons is the only voice of reason. It seems the tricksters only tricks the yank peoples pants down. I've not heard of that one being used in Washington. At least, not literally.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Getting pantsed will be big again.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow!! It certainly looks like a serious discussion going on there! LOL. This is such a fun election, I still want Ned to be president. I've still got my banner: NED FOR PRES!! Loving this! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Wow!! It certainly looks like a serious discussion going on there! LOL. This is such a fun election, I still want Ned to be president. I've still got my banner: NED FOR PRES!! Loving this! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Thank you, Sandra. Who knows. Ned might be nominated as a fourth party candidate.
Comment from JSD
Just bizarre and crazy writing but compelling and fascinating. You have a lovely imagination to produce such a strange world but it is entirely successful. Well done.
John
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Just bizarre and crazy writing but compelling and fascinating. You have a lovely imagination to produce such a strange world but it is entirely successful. Well done.
John
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Thank you, John.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, it certainly is pouring here - so much going on and I wasn't sure what happened but the chaos seems to be keeping planned chaos from happening, I think.
I wasn't sure what this meant:
"She slaps AB's face as GED pants him" So Ann slaps Brah but what does "pants him" mean? I never saw "pants" used as a transitive verb before.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Well, it certainly is pouring here - so much going on and I wasn't sure what happened but the chaos seems to be keeping planned chaos from happening, I think.
I wasn't sure what this meant:
"She slaps AB's face as GED pants him" So Ann slaps Brah but what does "pants him" mean? I never saw "pants" used as a transitive verb before.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Pants is a colloquial term for pulling someone's pants down. It sometimes leads to leaving the victim pants-less somewhere.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
It has been a while since I read your play and you wrote plays. I forgot what a Kwanza was. I'm eager to find out about the dead bugs. It will not help with the election.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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It has been a while since I read your play and you wrote plays. I forgot what a Kwanza was. I'm eager to find out about the dead bugs. It will not help with the election.
Well done.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023
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Kwanzaa is an African American holiday begun in 1966 and celebrated from December 26 through January 1.
Comment from jim vecchio
Whats the difference between a politician and a snail?
One is slimy, a pest, and leaves a trail everywhere and the other is a snail.
I hear Trump might be running for British Prime Minister. He wants to assure each British citizen buys whole cheese for pasta, so he can make Britain grate again
What's the difference between death and taxes? Congress doesn't meet every year to make death worse.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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Whats the difference between a politician and a snail?
One is slimy, a pest, and leaves a trail everywhere and the other is a snail.
I hear Trump might be running for British Prime Minister. He wants to assure each British citizen buys whole cheese for pasta, so he can make Britain grate again
What's the difference between death and taxes? Congress doesn't meet every year to make death worse.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023
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You are a funny man, Jim.
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I would've said more if I could spell "raspberry".