Ebbing Storm
As storm slides away, a rainbow signals coming calm.2 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Great rhyme and entry for this competition. Ever since I remarked entrants were using illustrations at the top, I've been running into poems like yours, with wonderful photos. Anyhow, a magnificent, poetic capture of promise and calm following the storm.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Great rhyme and entry for this competition. Ever since I remarked entrants were using illustrations at the top, I've been running into poems like yours, with wonderful photos. Anyhow, a magnificent, poetic capture of promise and calm following the storm.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Appreciated.
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Hope you do well in this contest!
Comment from Eleri
This is a lovely poem about rainbows and what they mean. The rhyming is generally good but I am a bit confused about the crops' tear stains bit and the first line of the second stanza should be rainbows promise or rainbow promises rather than what you have written. Having said that I do like this poem so good luck in the competition
Eleri
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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This is a lovely poem about rainbows and what they mean. The rhyming is generally good but I am a bit confused about the crops' tear stains bit and the first line of the second stanza should be rainbows promise or rainbow promises rather than what you have written. Having said that I do like this poem so good luck in the competition
Eleri
Comment Written 03-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. tearstains refer to the raindrops on the leaves of corn. Thanks for the catch re: promises.
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Thanks for the read and the review. I will check on your suggestions.
crops' tearstain are the raindrops that have fallen on a farmer's crops as indicated by the picture.