Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

I thought this was a wonderful poem for the contest. I loved the visuals you created with uplifting words that brought smiles and yes joy to your readers. I think that is why I voted for it. Very well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023

Thank you so much. I'm glad my thoughts came through - and thank you for the vote it's treasured.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I wish I had six stars! I can relate because I had been. Blinded through my 20s and 30s MS attacked my sight my optic nerves are so scared they don't even register on an eye doctors machine specific test they are thin. On tired days I can hardly see so I hold my breath. Your poem sounds beautiful I totally understand what you mean. When I see at my worst I have had to and still have to imagine the best. Such a beautiful poem and especially for some one like me I feel I understood usually I think no one could possibly understand and I plug ahead for 30 years and counting now. Fighting MS iss how I spent my 20s and 30s. Thank you for writing this it's God inspired I'm sure.ð???

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leaving such a nice review. I'm only sorry to know of the extent of the problems you suffer with, though you appear to be the sort of person that refuses to let it bring you down. Bless you and keep finding joyful reasons to smile. :)

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Well this is a lovely, uplifting read after reviewing so much gloom and doom! Your imagery and personification are a delight. So thank you for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.