Relief
Ahhh!5 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Comedy in Relief. Everything was explained in a sensible and understandable way. We could all see and feel your every thought. It is nice sometimes not to have to grope in the dark to try to understand what an author really means. Well done.
Karen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Comedy in Relief. Everything was explained in a sensible and understandable way. We could all see and feel your every thought. It is nice sometimes not to have to grope in the dark to try to understand what an author really means. Well done.
Karen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you for your kind review!
Kristen
Comment from Andrea Kepple
Your poem made me smile. I love the choices you made, the imagines you chose to include in your poem. You have a little bit of something everyone should be able to relate to.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Your poem made me smile. I love the choices you made, the imagines you chose to include in your poem. You have a little bit of something everyone should be able to relate to.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review!
Comment from Ellen C M Threatts
This was a unique and surprising read. I love the Title. Simple and to the point. Very different approach when choosing the Emotion. Spot on.
The bill-paying effort when payday arrives is a satisfying moment that most working people take for granted. I know I do.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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This was a unique and surprising read. I love the Title. Simple and to the point. Very different approach when choosing the Emotion. Spot on.
The bill-paying effort when payday arrives is a satisfying moment that most working people take for granted. I know I do.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ah, relief! Yup, this is what you have when you try to accomplish all your tasks:) and is advisable to venture beyond mundane affairs. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Ah, relief! Yup, this is what you have when you try to accomplish all your tasks:) and is advisable to venture beyond mundane affairs. Thank you for sharing, and good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from JSD
Nicely structured. I love the way you build the poem up and then drop it, perfectly, on the emotion that is the subject. Great stuff. Just, 'aloe on a burn'? No idea. Sorry.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Nicely structured. I love the way you build the poem up and then drop it, perfectly, on the emotion that is the subject. Great stuff. Just, 'aloe on a burn'? No idea. Sorry.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2023
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Thank you for your review!