Bee's Knees
2-5-2 Entry7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes this is indeed a treat as honey bee's feet taste sweet, a fun post and I enjoyed this presentation, I wish you luck with the contest, it is hard to write something meaningful with so few syllables, love Dolly x
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Yes this is indeed a treat as honey bee's feet taste sweet, a fun post and I enjoyed this presentation, I wish you luck with the contest, it is hard to write something meaningful with so few syllables, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I love the flow of your poem.
The rhyming pattern works well with the poem.
The photo chosen works to amplify the poem.
Good luck with the contest.
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I love the flow of your poem.
The rhyming pattern works well with the poem.
The photo chosen works to amplify the poem.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
An amazing pic and the perfect verse to reflect the image. Love the rhyming, the smooth flow of the lines and the essence of sweetness! Well done and a winner for me! Debbie
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An amazing pic and the perfect verse to reflect the image. Love the rhyming, the smooth flow of the lines and the essence of sweetness! Well done and a winner for me! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2/5/2 prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Excellent entry for the 2/5/2 prompt contest. I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is absolutely darling! You did such a fun job with this --words, rhyme, and picture-- that I cannot imagine it won't make it into the top three. Good luck. I haven't read all the entries yet, but so far, this is the one that's getting my vote. xo
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This is absolutely darling! You did such a fun job with this --words, rhyme, and picture-- that I cannot imagine it won't make it into the top three. Good luck. I haven't read all the entries yet, but so far, this is the one that's getting my vote. xo
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from JSD
Neatly done and impressive to have three rhymes. Rounds the whole piece up and makes it so satisfying to read. Great illustration too. Good luck in the competition.
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Neatly done and impressive to have three rhymes. Rounds the whole piece up and makes it so satisfying to read. Great illustration too. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Oh yes! This is delightful.
You got rhymes at the end of each line.
Flows smoothly and doesn't sound forced.
I smell a winner perhaps. Best one I've read.
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead
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Oh yes! This is delightful.
You got rhymes at the end of each line.
Flows smoothly and doesn't sound forced.
I smell a winner perhaps. Best one I've read.
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
