2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "An Old Fashioned Love Affair".
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely love this. I want to ask, and of course, I will give you recognition as the author, can I use this poem when this book goes to publishing, which will be like in a year or more? What I'm thinking is toward the beginning where a short description of the story is.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
Thank you!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely love this. I want to ask, and of course, I will give you recognition as the author, can I use this poem when this book goes to publishing, which will be like in a year or more? What I'm thinking is toward the beginning where a short description of the story is.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Oh, I am so happy you like it. I was a little nervous. You may use the poem any time you like. I love Emma and Seth (*=*)
Thank you for all your kind and encouraging reviews. Be well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aww such a sweet romantic little verse...
i'm sure barbara will love it too!
nice smooth flow
with imagistic word choices
i could totally see a couple sitting somewhere side-by-side just holding hands...
good free verse
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
aww such a sweet romantic little verse...
i'm sure barbara will love it too!
nice smooth flow
with imagistic word choices
i could totally see a couple sitting somewhere side-by-side just holding hands...
good free verse
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you Shelley (*=*)
Comment from aryr
The picture of the two of them sitting on the swing and the single rose after says it all. Gypsy. You have had your trials and tribulations, haven't you. The whole thing is to be patient. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
The picture of the two of them sitting on the swing and the single rose after says it all. Gypsy. You have had your trials and tribulations, haven't you. The whole thing is to be patient. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Aryr ((*=*))
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem- nice picture presentation - swinging on the porch together - accurately depicting an old fashion romance- not just a single pointed fling focused on lust - I love memories of those romances- kiss goodnight at the door - good job - AP
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
I like your free verse poem- nice picture presentation - swinging on the porch together - accurately depicting an old fashion romance- not just a single pointed fling focused on lust - I love memories of those romances- kiss goodnight at the door - good job - AP
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
That is so cool. Using the inspiration of a novel and the main characters. I liked the timidness of the attraction and the patience exhibited. Some things are worth waiting for. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
That is so cool. Using the inspiration of a novel and the main characters. I liked the timidness of the attraction and the patience exhibited. Some things are worth waiting for. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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I follow Barbara's book and I really like Seth and Emma. I love Jameson and Iris too. I don't usually read prose but I follow a few of the good ones. It has to have good imagery.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! I know Barbara will love this! You got the depth of the relationship between Emma and Seth. Both love each other but both are hesitant and don't want to suffer the hurt they had before nor cause any hurt. Well done!!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
Wow! I know Barbara will love this! You got the depth of the relationship between Emma and Seth. Both love each other but both are hesitant and don't want to suffer the hurt they had before nor cause any hurt. Well done!!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2023
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Thank you. I'm a little nervous. I hope she likes it.
Thank you very much big sister. (*÷*)
Love xoxo
Marival
Comment from JSD
I think it should be 'Old Fashioned' really but otherwise this is rich with longing and resonates with love and passion. Another excellent poem. Well done.
John
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
I think it should be 'Old Fashioned' really but otherwise this is rich with longing and resonates with love and passion. Another excellent poem. Well done.
John
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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thanks! i fixed the spelling error
Thank you, John :) may you have a great evening
gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
A lovely response to this artwork, it is a Romantic and desirous condition to dwell, may men and women know the joy of loving and desiring, well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
A lovely response to this artwork, it is a Romantic and desirous condition to dwell, may men and women know the joy of loving and desiring, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Thank you, Roy :) may you have a great evening
gypsy hugs
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Most welcome