2023 Gypsy's Clubs
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Perfect Moonbeams".
6 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Beautiful imagery! The beauty of the moonbeams shines through even if through broken glass. It even makes broken glass perfect.
I enjoyed this. It fits your Wabi-Sabi perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
Beautiful imagery! The beauty of the moonbeams shines through even if through broken glass. It even makes broken glass perfect.
I enjoyed this. It fits your Wabi-Sabi perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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You are very kind. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for the excellent 5 stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
excellent beauty seem through the broken window
good imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
excellent beauty seem through the broken window
good imagery and smooth flow
cool pics, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023
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You are very kind. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for the excellent 5 stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't think there is such a thing as an imperfect moonbeam. Nope, there's not. I enjoyed reading. I can see the hope of love riding on those moonbeams, even through a broken window. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
I don't think there is such a thing as an imperfect moonbeam. Nope, there's not. I enjoyed reading. I can see the hope of love riding on those moonbeams, even through a broken window. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful wabi-sabi poem (haiku), Gypsy. I adored your honesty with this one. Your words encompassed the broken window and the midnight stars. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
What a wonderful wabi-sabi poem (haiku), Gypsy. I adored your honesty with this one. Your words encompassed the broken window and the midnight stars. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very beautiful. I like how the image was something heavenly but enhanced by the broken glass. Very cool poem. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
This was very beautiful. I like how the image was something heavenly but enhanced by the broken glass. Very cool poem. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Gretchen
Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of Wabi-Sabi meaning in your lovely haiku! In life we all become broken but even in our brokenness, the beauty that God created can still shine through us.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
Great use of Wabi-Sabi meaning in your lovely haiku! In life we all become broken but even in our brokenness, the beauty that God created can still shine through us.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you very much for the lovely review, big sister. Happy weekend.
love xoxo
marival