The Night Sky
as the days turn into night2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed reading this haiku suite as it gives us a vivid picture of nightfall. I especially like the last stanza describing the owl. A very effective refrain showing the slow passage of time. Rod
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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I enjoyed reading this haiku suite as it gives us a vivid picture of nightfall. I especially like the last stanza describing the owl. A very effective refrain showing the slow passage of time. Rod
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from jim vecchio
I loved that owl picture! But, this is about your words. You posted a wonderful entry in the Haiku Suite competition. Loved the way the first stanza talked about days, the second, evening, and the third centered on a specific (the owl) tying it all together.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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I loved that owl picture! But, this is about your words. You posted a wonderful entry in the Haiku Suite competition. Loved the way the first stanza talked about days, the second, evening, and the third centered on a specific (the owl) tying it all together.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work and leave such encouraging comments.
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work and leave such encouraging comments.
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Your writing, in turn, encourages and motivates many!