Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I like the repetition contained in the poem. Your poem gave me a chuckle after a long day. It's nice to read a poem that is easy to understand and flows from the beginning to the end.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

Bless you.

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023

It was not supposed to be released. It?s still a work in progress. There is a twist coming. Thanks

reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023

It?s finished. Lulu is my granddaughter


Lulu and The Pod


Lulu likes the green
Of peas in the pod
Peas in a pod
Peas in a pod

Lulu likes the taste
Of peas from the pod
Green peas from the pod
Peas from the pod

Lulu likes the crunch
Of green peas from the pod
Peas in the pod
Peas in the pod

Lulu likes to poop
Green poop from the pod
Poopy peas from the pod
Slime green from the pod

It stinks pee from the pod


Verse Two


ARF ARF!
BOW WOW!
I'm a dog
Lulu growls

You give me the peas from the pod
Green slime peas from the pod
Poopy peas from the pod

Stinky pods with green pee
That's what you give to me

It's disgusting
Lulu growls

I hate green peas in the pod


Verse Three

It's your fault
Lulu barked

I want a Hot Dog on a bun
And..........

No more peas in the pod

reply by Andrea Kepple on 29-Jul-2023

I love your poem. It made me smile and then it made me laugh. Thank you for sharing it with me.

reply by the author on 01-Aug-2023

Bless you.