Songs of Recovery
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Cutting Words"A collection of poems around healing.
3 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Brava! Good for you for expressing with such genuine, heartfelt words, the pain and anger you justifiably feel. Here your words are used justly as powerfully sharp weapons to protect yourself and those you love. Well done!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Brava! Good for you for expressing with such genuine, heartfelt words, the pain and anger you justifiably feel. Here your words are used justly as powerfully sharp weapons to protect yourself and those you love. Well done!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad it came out as well as it did. I appreciate your time and I hope you're having a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, this is amazing! I love it and wish I could give you a six! Your sentiments cut to the heart straightaway and I'm fully engaged and inspired all the way through. Your imagery is skilful and not overdone and the metaphor of birds in the last stanza conveys the force of your emotions very effectively. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Wow, this is amazing! I love it and wish I could give you a six! Your sentiments cut to the heart straightaway and I'm fully engaged and inspired all the way through. Your imagery is skilful and not overdone and the metaphor of birds in the last stanza conveys the force of your emotions very effectively. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad it came out as well as it did. I appreciate your time and I hope you're having a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Birds have no problem expressing their anger and make their emotions known when they are annoyed, a find free-write and I loves the metaphors here, we humans know how to also scatter feathers, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Birds have no problem expressing their anger and make their emotions known when they are annoyed, a find free-write and I loves the metaphors here, we humans know how to also scatter feathers, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2023
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad it came out as well as it did. I appreciate your time and I hope you're having a wonderful weekend!