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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful free write Michelle, full of life's journey through the seasons and how we change as we grow, I adore the sentiments and your well chosen words, this is worth a six, but I just gave my last one away, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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This is a wonderful free write Michelle, full of life's journey through the seasons and how we change as we grow, I adore the sentiments and your well chosen words, this is worth a six, but I just gave my last one away, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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I'm glad you liked this because it is actually written for my husband who recently lost his only sibling , his older brother. This was their relationship. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Comment from Sally Law
This is precious of the bond of brothers. I have three sons and three grandsons so I see it every day. Even as they age, they've remained close. Wonderful poem that tugged at my heart.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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This is precious of the bond of brothers. I have three sons and three grandsons so I see it every day. Even as they age, they've remained close. Wonderful poem that tugged at my heart.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you. Glad you saw the meaning in it.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, brothers do journey through thick and thin, and all the changes that the seasons and years throw at them, a wonderful and uplifting read, very well presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Excellent, yes, brothers do journey through thick and thin, and all the changes that the seasons and years throw at them, a wonderful and uplifting read, very well presented****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you for the words as well as the stars.
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a lovely poem about two brothers growing up together
The poet uses a clever metaphor in saying the boys are siblings "like trees amid weeds", This is added to in the phrase"brown brother trees change", speaking of the colors of Autumn that bedeck the clothes the two boys wear. Speaking of them as trees the poet lulls them to sleep with the cold of Winter, waking only with Spring stirring them with
"mist, warmth and light".As the poem continues it touches briefly on God's Power, planting the seeds "over and over"
Finally the poem speaks of two brothers from the Bible , Moses and Aaron. They lived together in harmony with God, each other and the Seasons, until the journey of each life was over/ cheers Cass
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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This is a lovely poem about two brothers growing up together
The poet uses a clever metaphor in saying the boys are siblings "like trees amid weeds", This is added to in the phrase"brown brother trees change", speaking of the colors of Autumn that bedeck the clothes the two boys wear. Speaking of them as trees the poet lulls them to sleep with the cold of Winter, waking only with Spring stirring them with
"mist, warmth and light".As the poem continues it touches briefly on God's Power, planting the seeds "over and over"
Finally the poem speaks of two brothers from the Bible , Moses and Aaron. They lived together in harmony with God, each other and the Seasons, until the journey of each life was over/ cheers Cass
Comment Written 17-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your understanding as well as the stars!