One Man's Calling
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I am glad Ben has turned out to have the ability to cast miracles. If anyone deserves sainthood status he does. Look how he even proects his young helper Tony from the seamier side of life. Also, he isn't beyond a bit of mischief. Nice writing. kay
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
I am glad Ben has turned out to have the ability to cast miracles. If anyone deserves sainthood status he does. Look how he even proects his young helper Tony from the seamier side of life. Also, he isn't beyond a bit of mischief. Nice writing. kay
Comment Written 14-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
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Thank you. I'm trying to thread a moving needle with Ben a totally committed man of God, yet every bit human.
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from lyenochka
Good for Ben! Not sure what happened to the policeman but I assume it had to be some divine intervention. I was surprised that Ben could get into a place a second time after that one girl do disappeared with him. I thought it was realistic that not all the girls wanted to escape.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
Good for Ben! Not sure what happened to the policeman but I assume it had to be some divine intervention. I was surprised that Ben could get into a place a second time after that one girl do disappeared with him. I thought it was realistic that not all the girls wanted to escape.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you. The cop was afflicted with ED - better than taking a disease home (if he was married) And this was pre-penicillin.
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Ah. Thanks for explaining.
Comment from Ulla
I haven't read much of this story,, so I'm still struggling catching up. Diamond Jim appears to be a shady figure, and I just wonder what Ben is going to do about it all. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
I haven't read much of this story,, so I'm still struggling catching up. Diamond Jim appears to be a shady figure, and I just wonder what Ben is going to do about it all. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you. The earlier section was Ben in the Colorado gold country.
Comment from Jim Wile
Okay, so Diamond Jim is still a degenerate after all and showing his true colors now. He is certainly starting to feel a hit to his income with so many of his girls leaving him. Looks like we're heading for a nice showdown. I wonder if Angelo will be involved in this too? Good chapter, Wayne.
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"Some of the ones that have been there a while..." (should be who instead of that.)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
Okay, so Diamond Jim is still a degenerate after all and showing his true colors now. He is certainly starting to feel a hit to his income with so many of his girls leaving him. Looks like we're heading for a nice showdown. I wonder if Angelo will be involved in this too? Good chapter, Wayne.
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"Some of the ones that have been there a while..." (should be who instead of that.)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you, and for the catch.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoy reading the chapters of your book. After each one, I look forward to the next. I did not quite get what happens to the cop. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
I enjoy reading the chapters of your book. After each one, I look forward to the next. I did not quite get what happens to the cop. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your review.
The cop developed ED.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Ben's new crusade is certainly a worthy one. It is remarkable that God has given him the power to lead the women, and no one could see them as long as they held hands with him. The punishment he brought down on the police officer was very sad if he had a wife.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
Ben's new crusade is certainly a worthy one. It is remarkable that God has given him the power to lead the women, and no one could see them as long as they held hands with him. The punishment he brought down on the police officer was very sad if he had a wife.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Sad, but maybe not as sad as bringing home a disease before penicillin was developed.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well done, Wayne. Another interesting chapter
and Ben is rescuing women who have been forced
into working as prostitutes in Diamond Jim's
bordello's. So far, so good. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
Well done, Wayne. Another interesting chapter
and Ben is rescuing women who have been forced
into working as prostitutes in Diamond Jim's
bordello's. So far, so good. Nancy:)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
I can see most of this unfolding as a story that count be true. Remind me of Dave Wilkerson and the Cross and switchblade. A minister who dealt with such. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the story.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
I can see most of this unfolding as a story that count be true. Remind me of Dave Wilkerson and the Cross and switchblade. A minister who dealt with such. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed the story.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you. That was exactly who I had in mind for that scene.
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Well, done, Bro.
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Am I muted, or blocked from your posts?
If one of my reviews was less than kind, I apologize - it was probably before I learned how to do it.
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Not sure. I will check it out.
Comment from BethShelby
It is good Ben fasts and prays before undertaking anything so dangerous as recueing the women for Diamon Jim Bordellos. It doen't pay to be thinking about visiting a bordello when Jim is praying if a man wants to keep his manhood.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
It is good Ben fasts and prays before undertaking anything so dangerous as recueing the women for Diamon Jim Bordellos. It doen't pay to be thinking about visiting a bordello when Jim is praying if a man wants to keep his manhood.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Hah! Yes, and thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from JSD
Long but compelling narrative still. The characters and the things you put them through are such fun to read. I always look forward to the next instalment and you don't disappoint.
John
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
Long but compelling narrative still. The characters and the things you put them through are such fun to read. I always look forward to the next instalment and you don't disappoint.
John
Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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How very kind of you. Thank you.